Just a writing experiment that's vaguely poetic. Wanted to see if I could use the same foundation for two "different" poems, one "good" and one "bad." Endings could be a bit better, but I couldn't think of anything else. Maybe I'll touch them up later.
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"Good" Ending
Tear my heart from my chest, so you can see it beat your name
Pounding out the syllables one by one, in hushed tones only you can hear
Watch the crimson blood course through my veins,
The bright red hues of passion, the firey colors of affection
Rip out my lungs, so they may join my heart in song
Pushing forth winds with which to carry the tune to your ears
Expel my m